sábado, 21 de fevereiro de 2009

Fanfic

The first two parts are of modupe who started the fic in http://z13.invisionfree.com/RanishekOnlineForums/index.php?showtopic=174x.php?showtopic=174
She hasn't written anything since 2007 and I gave it an ending, so the 3rd part is mine.
Pairing: Rani and Abhishek
Rating: +16
This is just fiction, ok? A fan fiction, don't freak out, and Rani and Abhishek, don't take it the wrong way, if you ever come across this, please! I repeat, it's just fiction, it's a story about two characters that were inspired on you - characters - it doesn't mean anything, it's just for fun.

Friends or Lovers ?... Part 1

Rani is finally getting a break well deserved after shooting 18 hours straight…. She is in New York working on her next movie Tara Rum Pum Pum. As she finally made it into her hotel room leaving all the noise on the sets, non stop make up and the continuous flirtation from Saif..She takes a deep breath as she collapsed on her king size bed fit for a queen. Her beautiful black hair with golden brown streaks lay beautifully on the pillow. She looks at her 24 karat titan ragan watch and could not believe it was midnight already. She sluggishly got up from her bed and undressed as she headed to the bathroom when she hears the voicemail alert on her cell phone that had been going off all day; "it is probably mama" she thought. She picks it up and started to play her messages; "Rani! it's papa ;just calling to say hello and mama sends her love" she smiles as she could also hear her mom's voice in the background screaming "we miss you" she turned on the bath faucet as she proceeded to listen to her next message; "hey Rani…."
She quickly turned off the faucet as her heart skipped uncountable beats; "it's abhi… just checking on you…hope you are doing alright;hope your hectic schedule is not wearing you out; hmmnnnnnnnnn; well I look forward to seeing you next week ….since my shoot is scheduled then. .. Miss ya bye" Rani smiled as she felt her body shiver while she replayed Abhi's message in her mind. She turns off her cell phone as she thought "who want's to listen to other messages after hearing a message like that" She quickly collected her self as she tied her bath robe tightly and stood in front of the bathroom mirror.. she whispered "why.why.why am I doing this to myself…you have already told him that you only want to be friends, so snap out of it" Rani sighed wishing that she could convince herself that she has no feelings for Abhi. She quickly turned on the faucet for her bath and watched her bubbles foam up… as she stared and concentrated deep enough so that she could get abhi of her mind for now.. She grabbed her scripts as she dissolved into the bath and disappeared into tomorrow's scenes.
To be Continued………




"Cut, Cut". This has been the comment of the day from director Siddharth Anand "saif ...we need to get this shot yaar". Rani squeaked as Saif looked more and more frustrated. "it most be all that staying up all night with your lady love" Rani said as she teased Saif since his girlfriend Rosa is in town... "oh stop Rani" Saif says as he whispered to her playfully " look who's here" Rani looked to the side and her heart skipped a beat as she took a quick nonchalant look at Abhi who has just arrived on the sets and is being greeted by everyone. "is that a blush I see Rani?" Saif teased Rani ... "Oh stop being silly". "it seems I am not the only one with love in town". "oh please Abhi is just a friend".. "yeah and I am a virgin"..saif whispered. Before Rani could even utter a response to saif..Siddharth came running back after welcoming Abhi screaming "action, action". It took a while but after 20 takes the scene was finally completed. As Rani walked towards her makeup chair ..she heard this thick masculine voice. that always made her blush "hey beautiful". She turned back as Abhi walked towards her to give her a warm hug..he always smelled good she thought as she also remembered how safe she feels in his hands "gosh Rani we need to get you some permanent hills..you make me feel like a giant". she laughed as she looked down her feet realizing that she took of her heels for some flat shoes as soon as she heard "cut". So how was your flight? ,Rani asked "not bad..I got a chance to sleep." The shooting for Umaroo Joon is officially complete he continued as he pulled the chair out for Rani and leaned against the wall. "Well good. I am sure the movie will do well. I am so happy for you". "So I hear about your steamy hot romance with Aditya" Abhi smiled as he teased Rani about tabloid stories that has been doing rounds in India about rani"s affair with movie producer Aditya Chopra. "Oh please..very funny..you can't even be friends with people and before you know it you are the reason for their divorce…..you are talking about me what about you Mr. hot shot.." "the sexiest man in India"…Abhi gave is best fake laugh as he shrugged thinking that Rani was going to ask him about Aish. Rani smiled as she kicked her self inside knowing that this would be the best time to question him about all the reported romance between him and Aish….which her friends has been driving her crazy with phone calls about.. "Mr. Bachchan are you ready for your touch up?" the make up artist called out …. "How about dinner tonight?" Abhi asked as he walked up for his touch up "sure why not" Rani said with a voice and a smile that can make any man fall in love.
After dinner Rani and Abhi went up to Rani's room. As they approached the door..Abhi said "well I don't want to keep you up too late since you have early morning shoot…" "no don't worry ..you can come in I am use to getting no sleep"..Abhi hesitated to go in as his mind flashed back to the last time he was alone in a room with Rani……………………………………….
It was a late shooting in New York during their last movie together KanK.. and everyone literally dragged with one eyes open to their hotel room. His room was next to Rani's room…Before he could drop on his bed he heard a soft knock and it was Rani….before he could even open the door fully she allowed herself in "I am too tired to sleep" "are you sleepy?" Rani asked as she carefully squeezed to the side of the bed and immediately turned on the TV…. "oh no not tonight ..you will not keep me up late by making me watch another girly movie" Abhi said as he grabbed the remote from Rani's hand. He carefully laid next to her on the bed as he grabbed the blanket underneath her.. "so tell me why can't you sleep….could it be because of the love scene shooting tomorrow.. with sharukh? ..you know how you always get nervous before shooting a love scene"…. "Oh my gosh you know me too well Abhi"…I don't know why I get like this before a love scene shoot..but you know what I don't get like this with you"…. "Abhi smiled as he moved closer to her.. "that's because we are practically married..I mean we have been married in all our movies so it is like second nature for me to make out with the queen bee of bollywood" "oh please Abhi" Rani said as she tried to hide her blushing face. Before she could even look back up she felt Abhi's hand softly and tenderly on her face as he sited up and used his other hand to pull her long brown tresses away from her face..at this time it was like everything stopped..Rani did not even utter a word as she looked up with her brown hazel eyes open wide staring at Abhi's deep black eyes.. he then took her right hand and softly kissed her palm as he placed her hand on his chest ..he was wearing his signature button less shirt …enabling Rani to feel the race of his heartbeat..she closed her eyes as their lips melted into each other….they both then lost all their inhibitions as they moved closer, as he tenderly held Rani's face their tongue begin to dance to the rhythm of their heart beat..it was total heaven until their rhythm was interrupted with a voice "room service" Rani quickly tapped Abhi who did not even hear this voice.. "Abhi get there door". Abhi quickly got up to answer the door..by the time he turned around after explaining to room attendant that he did not request room service..rani has already got up and ready to leave…. "where are you going? Abhi asked as he held on to Rani's hand.. "you know we both need to get some sleep" Rani said "I love you Rani" Abhi whispered as Rani let go and walked towards the door" "oh please Abhi stop with your silliness" "I am not being silly..this thing between us is more than friendship and you know that"… "Abhi there is no need to complicate things..we have a great friendship..and plus with both of our hectic careers it will never work"….. "why won't it work…………..unless you can look me in the eye and tell me you don't love me". Rani kept her face towards the door as she said softly… "we have a great friendship Abhi and let's just leave it as that". …………..
"Abhi,Abhi let me have your jacket" Rani said as she yelled playfully to Abhi who appeared to be lost in some deep thoughts. "Well hopefully we will rap up shooting next week and I should be back in India next week ..Rani said as she hung Abhi's coat. "So when does the shooting for Guru start for you?".. Perhaps next month Abhi said… "So another movie with Aish …...Rani said as she sat on the bed next to Abhi…… Abhi quickly jumped in knowing this would be the best time to tell Rani about Aish… "I wanted to tell you myself" "Well news travels fast" Rani said as she felt her voice becoming shaky as she became tearful…. "Gosh Abhi…..I guess maybe you did not love me afterall?.. "Please don't say that Rani…I will always love you..Those words I said to you and the moment we shared is real to me..and no one said anything about love with Aish..I do like her and I enjoy her company".. "Please spare me the details"..rani said as she wiped her tears with her hand….. "well you moved on pretty fast"…. "Rani it has been months and you cut me off every time I tried to talk to you and you practically avoided me when we returned to India" "Gosh Abhi I needed time to absorb what happened…I guess I thought you would wait for me" "I am sorry Rani" "no don't be sorry..If you are happy with her..then you have to follow you heart..and as your friend I am happy for you" Rani said as she prepared to get up..Abhi grabbed a hold of her hand as he got up and gave a warm hug.. "you are the best" he whispered as they both held on tightly.
To Be Continued……………..Friends Or Lovers?



Well, I really liked your story and it seems like you're not going to finish it since the last time you updated it was in 2007... I hope you don't mind, but I imagined an ending, an alternative ending until you decide to continue it, ok?



" in Rani's room"
Abhi hugged her tightly, he had missed her very much the last months, she had avoided him after his declaration of love to her and made him feel like shit. He had moved on, he was dating this awesome woman and now Rani was bringing back again all those feeling he had for her. "I, I guess I thought you would wait for me". She loved him too. He felt she was playing with his feelings and that wasn't fair. They stepped back a little from each other, she looked up at him, she had tears in her eyes, maybe she was regretting her attitude towards him over the last months. He didn't know, but he knew he was in love with her still, but he also liked Aish, his heart was confused and he couldn't see Rani tearful, he raised a hand to clear one tear that had rolled to her check.Her heart was painful, she felt so angry with herself, why had she been so stupid, why did she let him go when she was in love with him too, how could she have been so selfish and then believe that somehow he would wait for her. She couldn't help regretting while looking into his big dark eyes. She felt his fingers touch her check, wiping out her tear, only if she could go back in time…-"I'm sorry."- was all she could pronounce. His eyes got wider. "I'm sorry for my selfishness, my egocentrism, my behavior, If I could go back in time…"
Her words were cut off by the pressure of his lips against hers, she responded to the kiss. It started off tender, slow, his hands rolled down her waist, while hers met behind his neck. Their heads changed angle, the kiss became more passionate, deeper. They moved closer to each other and against the wall. No single thought crossed both of their minds except the word desire. He pulled her up, her legs across his hips, his hand unbuttoning her shirt, while hers did the same. He pushed her on to the bed and took off the rest of his clothes.
Rani looked at his naked body who was now taking off her bottom clothes and realized how this would end, she couldn't stop it halfway, she didn't want to. She had never been in love with anyone else; if she had come too late, if she had lost him, at least she would have that night to remember, she thought, to comfort and convince her own mind of what she was doing. Abhi was now caressing her skin and kissing all her body, starting from bellow, she couldn't avoid releasing small sounds of pleasure.He took her bra, the last piece of cloth she had on and gently squeezed her breasts while licking, kissing and biting the nips. Her hands hold his head while he did this, showing in a way her incentive to carry on. He moved up to her neck, while their waists met and fit and she opened her legs to welcome his. Their lips met again in a passionate kiss, while his hands pressured hers along her head.
She couldn't help a small scream when he penetrated her. The pain was sudden and strangely mixed with pleasure; the feeling of him inside her couldn't be described in words while he came again and again. She was a virgin, he realized, the resistance when he penetrated her and why she wasn't moving like she would and the somehow painful scream couldn't mean anything else. The feeling of being the fist man in her life made him feel she was all his. "she must love me", he thought, she wouldn't wait so long, especially in the show business world, to "waist" it on me if she didn't have strong feelings for me. He felt his love and respect for her increase. His anger towards her selfishness was long gone.
The pleasure increased greatly as they reached the orgasm at the same time. The contractions of her vagina made her feel him even more while it gave him more pleasure. They kissed again and after a while he got off from top of her and laid next to her. They automatically cuddled together, her head against his chest, their legs crossed, his arm holding hers on the top of his stomach and they fell asleep.
Abhi woke up first in the morning, he looked down at Rani's sleeping face and to her naked body and smiled remembering their night. He thought of Aishwarya and how he cheated her almost without thinking, and that had been very wrong. She was an amazing woman who cared for him and she didn't deserve what he had just done to her. He knew it would hurt her terribly but he would have to be honest with her and tell her the truth, all of it, and the sooner the better. If Rani was willing to give a chance to their love, he was too, he truly loved her, like he had never loved anyone before, that was clear to him now.
Rani woke up soon after Abhi and found herself cuddled in his arms, as they had fallen asleep. Reality hit her hard, as she remembered their night. She couldn't find the reasons for letting it happen. She had always had that conviction that most people her age find an overcome idea, that her first time would be with her husband after marriage or at least with a man she loved and had a strong and long relationship, a commitment that might or might not lead to marriage, but what they had would be serious. And what had she done? She had slept with Abhishek. They had a long history of friendship and she loved him more than she had ever loved any man, but what relationship did they have? Absolutely none, in fact he was dating another woman, whom he had said he liked…
She felt confused, guilty, used, disappointed with herself, with her personal life. How could she be friends with Abhi after this? Would he tell Aish what had happened between them? How would she take it? The two of them didn't get along already. Had this meant anything for Abhi?All this questions were piling up in her mind, she was thinking too much, she had to get out, she needed space, and she needed air. She sat and look at Abhi, his warm eyes looked into hers. He was smiling.
-"Good morning!" – he said.
-"Good morning" – she answered, while avoiding his gaze, looking down, involuntarily at his naked body. She felt a pain in her heart and missed air.
-"Abhi, I can't…I need to be alone…" – she got up and walked towards the bathroom and closed the door behind her. Her eyes filled with tears.
Abhishek didn't quite expect that reaction, he wanted to talk to her, he got up and looked at the bed. He saw the blood stain in the sheets. He imagined how she should be feeling. He couldn't leave her alone like she had asked; they had to clear up things right now.
-"Rani!" – He said while he knocked and opened the bathroom door. He saw her quickly wiping her tears, so he wouldn't see.He grabbed her waist and pushed her close to him. Her naked breasts were touching his chest at the rhythm of her nervous breath.
-"Abhi, please!"
-"I love you Rani! Always have, always will. I want to be with you. I want us to work. Will you give us a chance?
-"And Aish?" – She asked.
-"We didn't have anything serious. I'll end everything with her today!" – he smiled at Rani.
She gave him a big smile and hugged him tightly and they gave a long passionate kiss…

And they lived happily ever after. The end! lol



5 comentários:

Anónimo disse...

"(...)while hers met behind his neck (...)" esta expressão está especialmente bonita. Momento muito febril, este que descreveste. Talvez a minina que começou a historia ñ a tenha acabado para fazer divagar a nossa imaginação individual. Esta continuação que criaste vai de encontro ao que os fans deste "casal" gostariam de saber reproduzido na realidade. Mas talvez as paixões mais vorazes e os sonhos mais bonitos crescam na impossibilidade de uma relação. O amor é uma coisa complicada...A todos toca, mas apenas cresce naqueles que na realidade o sabem preservar. Alimenta-se de pequenos momentos e mera na quietude de um olhar, na ansiedade de um toque, na entrega de um beijo.

Anónimo disse...

Joana, escreves bem demais! Adorei o teu comentário, está lindo!!! :)
Eu já não gosto da hitória, como te disse, depois do que a Anjali disse de que "there's no way Rani was a virgin", a fic perdeu toda a credibilidade (mais do que aquela que era possível, uma vez que ele é casado de facto com a Aish. Agora soa-me tonta e ridícula, uma vez que se pensarmos nisso, a Anjali tem provavelmente razão...
Paciência :(
Obrigado por comentares! Fiquei muito contente:)
Beijinho***

Anónimo disse...

Morgaine não é nada tonta e ridícula!As fics são histórias e como tal podemos dar asas à nossa imaginação.Tá bem k na vida real ela já ñ fosse virgem, mas isto ñ é vida real e como disseste o abhi já é casado, isto nunca iria acontecer. Tu escreveste uma fic fabulosa, eu gostei imenso.
Joana concordo c/ a morgaine tu escreves msm mto bem.
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Anónimo disse...

Obrigada Maria, és uma querida! :)
A 1ª pessoa a quem eu a mostrei e que a leu em 1ª mão, ;)
Os teus elogios são sempre um espetáculo e um grande incentivo:)
Beijinho grande

Anónimo disse...

Acabei de ler agora, priminha.

Antes de mais, muitos parabéns, está muito bom.

Nota-se claramente a mudança de autora, pela mudança de abordagem e linguagem.
Quando li a parte "made him feel like shit", pensei logo "Ena, que brutos!".

Devo também dizer que comecei a temer pela longevidade do Mensagem quando comecei a ler mais para baixo e o ambiente começou a aquecer por lá, pelo quarto da Rani.

Quanto às questões de ele ser casado ou não, na vida real...
Sinceramente só percebi que as personagens eram mesmo os actores enquanto pessoas reais quando li os comentários.

Assim sendo, para mim, não interessam nada esses pormenores sobre a vida real dos actores. Uma história destas vale pela ficção e pela imaginação, e não pela forma como segue a realidade dos factos.

Com isto em mente, parabéns priminha! Estás lá! ;D

Quanto à história em si, no seu "todo", o facto de ele a amar e de ela gostar dele como um amigo, e ainda assim manterem uma boa amizade, fez-me pensar em certas questões da minha própria vida... Conseguiram aqui uma ficçãozita que me tocou cá dentro... Gostei.
Claro que este é um final feliz que não me parece que se vá reflectir na minha realidade, mas alimenta sempre alguns sonhos, e isso é sempre bom.
Já disse alguém que não me lembro quem mas, como diz a Teresa Guilherme, "isso agora não interessa nada":
"O dia em que parar de sonhar será o dia da minha morte."

Agora vou ler o último artigo, e já comento.

Muitos beijões, meninas!... E portem-se mal!
Peace ;p